April 20, 2012
Room 108 Building B12
guangzhou University of Science and Technology
Jingsu, China 51000
Dear Sir/Madam:
Thank you very much for skimming my letter in your busy time. And I am very appreciate than your esteemed company would give me an opportunity.
First please allow me to introduce myself. My English name is Cathy. I am the graduate student in Foreign College of Jingsu University of Science and Technology. I learn that your company is recruiting now. I am confident that four years of university study and the social practice can help me to apply for the position in your company.
I have had a solid theoretical foundation because of the four years of English learning. The annual internship experience make me from theory to practice, although I have no formal work experience. However I am sure that I have a certain degree of understanding of the foreign trade posts and the translation work. And I believe that I have a strong learning ability, and Ican completely adapt to the new work in a short time.
Under the teacher's strict teaching and my personal efforts, I have formed a solid foundation of professional knowledge, mastered the business English knowledge. At the the spare time I also actively read the professional knowledge of the relevant newspapers and magazines, understing the new economic situation, and initially have a good command of www.jianli-sky.com English basic communication and translation ability. In addition, I also actively participate in community activities and volunteer service activities, take part in the English speech contest, translation contest, English tongue twisters and English about the game, also involve in the strawberry Music Festival, better Xijin ferry and other large activities of the volunteer activities. These practice allow me to chece my knowledge, and also make me to have the strong ability of analysis and solving problems, and make me more confident and mature.
Self-confidence and perseverance is my principle,and calm and optimism is the attitude of my way. I have the confidence and hope to get the opportunity to work in your company. Attach a brief resume. Thank you again for your concern for me. Look foraward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Cathy
篇幅過短和過長
太多的人想把他們的經(jīng)歷壓縮在一頁紙上，因為他們曾經(jīng)聽說履歷最好不要超過一頁。當將履歷格式化地縮到一頁時，許多求職者就刪除了他們給人深刻印象的成就。反之亦然。就拿那些在履歷上用幾頁紙漫談不相干的或者冗長的經(jīng)歷的候選人來說，看的人很容易就會覺得無聊。所以，當你寫履歷時，試著問自己：”這些陳述會讓我得到面試的機會嗎?”然后，僅僅保留那些會回答”是”的信息。
決定其篇幅的因素包括有職業(yè)、企業(yè)、工作經(jīng)歷、教育和造詣程度等等。最重要的就是，履歷中的每一個字都要能夠推銷該候選人。
人稱代詞和冠詞的用法
履歷是商業(yè)溝通的形式，它應(yīng)該是簡潔和正式的，不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)“我”的字樣，且盡量少用冠詞。試看一例：
陳述：我已經(jīng)開發(fā)了一種新的產(chǎn)品，它使銷售額增加了200萬，使部分銷路總量增加了12%。
應(yīng)該寫成：新開發(fā)的產(chǎn)品使銷售額增加了200萬，使部分銷路總量增加了12%。