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別踩地雷!托福寫作失分點(diǎn)有哪些
想要在托福寫作考試中取得高分,就必須要對(duì)寫作中的那些失分點(diǎn)有所了解!因此,在今天的文章中,應(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生網(wǎng)小編就新托福寫作失分點(diǎn)進(jìn)行了搜集與整理,還望各位備戰(zhàn)托?荚嚨目忌軌蜃⒁狻
托福寫作為什么拿不到高分?今天,小編就幫大家整理了新托福寫作中最常見的22個(gè)失分點(diǎn),希望可以給考生的托?荚噦淇紟韼椭!
1.結(jié)構(gòu)不平行
例子:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.
將一系列的單詞連接起來的時(shí)候,應(yīng)當(dāng)使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語。
2.不知所云
例子:Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落過長(zhǎng),不分段,主語與動(dòng)詞一致問題
例子:She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.
主語和動(dòng)詞不一致。
4.句子別扭
例子:We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.
措辭過長(zhǎng)或不清。換言之,句子顯得滑稽可笑。
5.拼寫錯(cuò)誤主語、動(dòng)詞或賓語有問題
例子:I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.
句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問題,缺少主語、動(dòng)詞或賓語,或者這些成分重復(fù)。
6.語氣與文章不符
例子:I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.
語氣與文章其他部分不相符,可能是過于正式或者太不正式。
7.代詞指代不明
例子:If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.
代詞所指代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。
8.過于籠統(tǒng)
例子:We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.
句子或者所表達(dá)的意思過于籠統(tǒng),不能提供多少信息。
9.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤
例子:Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.
動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)不正確,檢查一下是應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過去時(shí)、將來時(shí)或者是完成時(shí)等等。
10.介詞多余
例子:I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.
在表示這種意思時(shí)此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見于downtown,home,there,here等詞。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而非名詞,因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。
11.跑題或不相關(guān)
例子:There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.這個(gè)與okay for children to fail sometimes.所表達(dá)的意思很普通,大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道了,因而就沒有必要再說出來。
12.標(biāo)點(diǎn)問題
例子:I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.
許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號(hào),尤其是當(dāng)他們用手寫的時(shí)候。
13.重復(fù)冗余
例子:Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.
一種意思的表述不止一次,或者某個(gè)詞語不必要。
14.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù)
例子:Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.
單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù),或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨(dú)使用,應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞(a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。
15.不要使用縮寫
在正式的寫作中不要使用縮寫形式(can’t,don’t,it’s,we’ll,they’ve等等),而應(yīng)當(dāng)使用單詞的完整形式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。
16.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語重復(fù)
例子:Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.
不能在該句的主要主語和主要?jiǎng)釉~前使用連詞。
17.句子不完整
例子:Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to getsintoscollege. For example, my friend in high school.
句子沒有主要主語或主要?jiǎng)釉~,因?yàn)槠鋵?shí)它應(yīng)是一個(gè)從句。這是一個(gè)非常常見的錯(cuò)誤,修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來。
18.不要使用get
例子:When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed.
get太不正式,意思也過于含糊,不適合用在正式的場(chǎng)合。應(yīng)將get改為一個(gè)更加具體的單詞,如become, receive, find, achieve,等等。
19.書寫難以辨認(rèn)信息不正確
例子:I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.
傳遞信息不正確,或者讓人聽起來覺得可能不正確(如果確實(shí)是正確的,應(yīng)當(dāng)解釋為什么這樣,因?yàn)樽x者不認(rèn)為是正確的)。上述例句中,all的意思是百分之百,我們不能絕對(duì)地說每一件新東西都是從美國(guó)誕生的。為保險(xiǎn)起見,應(yīng)當(dāng)使用many或most。非英語單詞Computers are very helpful and advantageable,盡管看起來像個(gè)單詞,其實(shí)不是,至少不是個(gè)英文單詞。使用這個(gè)單詞的另一種形式。
20.選詞不恰當(dāng)
例子:I was late getting home because I lost my way.
在這種情況下不應(yīng)該使用該詞,可選擇更好的詞語。
21.單詞形式不當(dāng)
例子:I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.
所使用的單詞的形式不正確,檢查一下應(yīng)該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種。
22.用詞錯(cuò)誤
例子:Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.
用詞錯(cuò)誤或在此種情況下該詞不是最佳用詞。
關(guān)于托福寫作的那些失分點(diǎn),就為眾位考生介紹到這里了。還請(qǐng)同學(xué)們?cè)谶M(jìn)行新托福寫作備考的時(shí)候,能夠注意!當(dāng)然,如果你還想了解有關(guān)托?荚嚨钠渌畔⒌脑挘瑧(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生網(wǎng)期待您的到來!
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