下面是小編搜集整理的考研英語寫作高分技巧,供大家閱讀參考。
一、審題
考生動筆之前必須仔細閱讀和分析題目,準確理解題目要求和相關提示,尤其是要準確理解圖表的含義。這一步相當重要,因為它直接關系到離題與否。
(1)看懂題目,確定寫作重心和范圍。如遇生詞,根據上下文猜測詞義。
(2)判斷所要求的文體。
二、構思
在考試中,考生首先應當持有“All is fish that comes to one's net.”的態度,在草稿紙上寫下所能想到的觀點和關鍵詞,然后認真進行篩選,“抓大魚,放小魚”,真正做到有的放矢。
三、選擇合適框架
由于研究生考試的寫作可采用數種框架,可以根據寫作的體裁和類型,選擇相應的模式。在考試中,考生在寫論說文的時候應注意不要被你現實中的立場所束縛,而是要根據題目的要求完成自己的寫作,畢竟我們的目的是為了考試過關。
四、動筆寫文章
這里所指的“寫文章”有別于一般的寫作?忌綍r練習時應積累一定數量的套句及過渡連接詞,并按不同框架事先構筑適合自己的模板,考試時將已經構思好的觀點和想法填入其中,略加潤色,即可形成一篇好的習作。考生使用適合自己的模板,不用為開篇、轉折或結尾句式而苦思冥想,從而節省寶貴的時間。注意,在寫作過程中,不要輕易改變立場或觀點,應盡可能按已經構思好的所列內容進行,如果你想到什么寫什么,那么你的文章就會顯得雜亂無章,缺乏連貫性。
五、檢查修改
檢查、修改作文盡可能不對文章做大的改動,不要隨便增加觀點或增減句子。主要應從以下幾方面著手:
(1)是否使用了正確的語法結構,比方說,動詞時態是否一致、主謂是否一致、用詞是否準確(尤其是名詞、動詞、形容詞)、冠詞是否錯誤和介詞是否錯誤。
(2)句式是否有變化。
(3)是否具有了一定的詞匯量。
(4)拼寫是否有誤。
(5)在每段的主題句中是否都表明了這個段落的中心思想,所有擴展句是否都緊扣主題。
(6)是否使用了過渡性詞語,因而句子之間和段落之間都具有邏輯性和條理性。
(7)每一段話是否都得到充分的展開。
(8)是否提供了足夠的細節、例子或論據。
(9)觀點是否明確。
(10)每一段話是否都緊扣文章的主題。
案例分析【一】
On Bargains(Original Version)
Spend less money and get good things. That is the dream everyone want to realize.① So many people like bargains. But some of them will find they don't get any profit from bargains.
If something in the market is notably cheap, a wish of buying it will occur to many people.②But the reason why it is cheap will not be concerned as after as its cheapness.③ After people buy these things, some of them will find they have been cheated. Sometimes these things are in bad quality.④ Sometimes they are actually more expensive. But next time, when they meet bargains again, they will make the same mistake again.⑤
The price of a product is adjusted by the market and society. It must keeping a rule.⑥ If something is not keeping the market rule, there must be a reason. We must find the reason, then we will make a good bargain. For example, when a bankrupt occurred to acompany the Court will sale the remainer of the company at a low price.⑦ This is a good bargain. For another example A company sale its outdated products at a low price. We all know, it isn't a good bargain.
、郬e, consumers must pay more attention to the quality of the products, not only the price.⑨ Then we can make a good bargain. also their quality. In this way, we can make a good bargain.
On Bargains(Revised Version)
Everyone wants to get good things with less money. So many people like bargains. But some of them will find they don't get any profit from bargains.
If something in the market is notably cheap, an intention of buying it will occur to many people. But they may not be concerned about the reason why it is cheap. After people buy these things, some of them will find they have been cheated. Sometimes they are actually of poor quality.But next time they are offered bargains again, they will make the same mistake again.
The price of a product is adjusted by the market and society. It must adhere to the market law. If it does not keep to the market law, there must be a reason. We must find the reason. Then we will make a good bargain. For example, when a company goes bankrupt, the remaining products of the company will be sold at a low price. This is a good bargain. However, if a company sells its expired products at a low price, it is not a good bargain.
Therefore, as consumers, we must pay attention to not only price of products but also their quality. In this way, we can make a good bargain.
點評:整篇文章結構安排較為緊湊,前后呼應。作者首先闡述了人們都想買廉價商品的心理,但同時又指出人們未必能從廉價商品中獲益。作者繼而又解釋了為什么人們有時候不能從廉價商品中得到好處。作者在第三段中又舉例說明了人們什么時候能從中受益,什么時候又會上當受騙。最后,作者得出結論,人們在注意價格的同時也必須注意質量,這樣,人們也就可以受益匪淺了。然而,文章中也出現了不少錯誤,現分析如下:
、僭牡谝痪涫瞧硎咕洌@得有點突兀。因此,可將第一、二句并為一句,這樣既簡潔,又明了,足以說明人們想買廉價商品的心理。
、诒硎救藗兊南敕ㄗ詈糜“intention”來代替原文中的“wish”。
③原文意思晦澀難懂,句子改換之后,意思就清楚了。這里,作者是想指出人們有可能只關心商品的廉價而忽視了它為什么便宜的原因。
④質量低劣應為:be of poor quality。
、輓ext time作為先行詞引導定語從句時,往往不用when引導,而是用that(that通?梢允÷)。
⑥情態動詞應該用動詞原形,而遵守市場規律的正確表達方式應該為:adhere to /keep to the market law。
、哌@里,時態應該一致,用一般現在時即可。而且,公司破產應為:go bankrupt。 “sale”是名詞形式,該詞的動詞形式應為:sell。
、啾揪浜蜕弦痪溆修D折意義,所以可以用however來連接,這樣,文章也顯得更緊湊了。而且,“過期產品”應為expired而不是outdated(過時的)。
、嵊胻herefore連接,起到承上啟下的作用。用not only...but also...結構使所要表述的意思更清晰了。