dear sir/madam:
as a teacher at xxxx school, i am writing to provide you a recommendation for miss/mr.xx so as to help you assess her/his application for acceptance into your program and consideration for financial aid.
considered a promising student with originality and sophistication in her/his thinking, (she/he was asked, in the spring semester of 20xx, to develop a subsystem of a dbms project for her b.s.thesis, for which i was the chief leader.
this subsystem was designed to manage the information of materials in no.1 foundry plant of dongfeng auto works.to do the job, she/he read many books about software engineering and took some courses in database principles and management. keenly aware that the design of a dbms decides the quality of the whole software system, she did her/his utmost from the beginning of the project.). from analyzing user’s requirements to designing the whole system, from the detailed designing to the final programming, she was very level-headed and full of innovation every step of the way. taking full advantage of her ability and creativity, she firmly focused herself on her objective and gnored all distractions. she successfully reached her goal. in the final software testing, only a few bugs were found in her subsystem. my appreciation of her talelent was thus confirmed.miss is a very personable woman, friendly and helpful, and she has always been a team player in her work.
i would greatly appreciate it if you could give her application for candidacy to your ph.d. program favorable consideration. should you need any further information in your deliberation, please do not hesitate to contact me.
sincerely
xxx
寫自薦信可按下列七個步驟進(jìn)行。
第一步：介紹消息來源
介紹消息來源實(shí)際上是求職信的開篇交待句，它可使求職信顯得自然、順暢;而不介紹消息來源，會使收信人感到意外、突然，文章也缺乏過渡、照應(yīng)，本文消息來源可作如下介紹：
dear manager,
i learned from the newspaper that your company wanted to hire an english translator。
第二步：表明求職心愿
介紹完消息來源后，應(yīng)向收信人表明自己的求職心愿，即寫信的目的，本文求職心愿可作如下介紹：
i'm interested in this job very much. i'd like to get this job。
第三步：介紹個人簡歷
某單位需要新人，求職人也有求職心愿，但這并不意味著這項工作非你莫屬。如果你沒有干好這項工作的經(jīng)歷、實(shí)力，也是難以適應(yīng)的。因此，介紹個人簡歷是必不可少的。本文個人簡歷可介紹如下：
now i'd like to introduce myself to you. my name is li ping. i'm 30 years old. i'm 180 cm tall. i'm healthy. i like swimming, singing and dancing in my spare time. i graduated from beijing university in 1994.then,i went to work in nantong middle school.in 1996，i began to work in suzhou middle school and i have worked there until now。
第四步：擺出求職優(yōu)勢
僅有一定的工作經(jīng)歷而沒有自身的優(yōu)勢和特長，也很難求得稱心如意的工作。因此，求職時應(yīng)表明自己除了具有一定的工作經(jīng)歷之外，還具有一定的優(yōu)勢和特長，這樣才能穩(wěn)操勝券。本文可通過如下方法擺出自己的優(yōu)勢：
i work hard and i can get along well with others. i'm good at english and especially my spoken english is very good. i've translated many chinese books into english. i can understand japanese and i can talk to foreigners in japanese freely。
第五步：提出獲職打算
豐富的工作經(jīng)驗，一定的優(yōu)勢和特長，只能代表過去和現(xiàn)在的情況，如果獲職后自以為心愿已了，從此高枕無憂，馬虎從事，那也是得不到用人單位認(rèn)可的。顯然表明獲職后努力工作的決心是感動用人單位的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)從而順利謀得此項工作的重要一環(huán)。本文獲職打算可作如下介紹：
if you agree with me, i'll work hard and try to be a good translator。
第六步：請求答復(fù)聯(lián)系
如果單位領(lǐng)導(dǎo)同意了你的求職要求，你必然要請他和你聯(lián)系，以便你及時做好準(zhǔn)備，到用人單位應(yīng)聘或報到。為準(zhǔn)確起見，請求答復(fù)聯(lián)系時你還應(yīng)當(dāng)提供你的通訊地址、郵政編碼、電話號碼、電子信箱等。本文答復(fù)聯(lián)系的內(nèi)容可作如下介紹：
if you agree with me, please write a letter to me or phone me. i live at no.1 renmin road,suzhou city. my telephone number is 3654371.
第七步：表明感激之情
無論你的請求是否能夠得到滿意的答復(fù)，你給用人單位寫信就是給對方添了麻煩，因此你應(yīng)向?qū)Ψ奖砻鞲屑ぶ�。本文可這樣來表明感激之情：
thank you very much。
上述七步內(nèi)容聯(lián)成一個整體，再加上下面的信尾，就成為一封完整的求職信。
yours truly
liping