求職信的第一段闡明寫信的目標(biāo)，有些專家以為不宜用分詞子句。如用下面的句子做開頭，由于這樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得陳舊，失去特色。
Replying to your advertisement …… Answering your advertisement …… Believing that there is an opportunity …… Thinking that there is a vacancy in your company …… Having read your ad ……
再比擬下列三句。(1)句較差，經(jīng)由修正后(2)句顯得較適當(dāng)。
A：(1)Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager……
(2)In applying for the position of sales manager I offer my qualifications, which I believe will meet your exacting requirements.
B：(1)I believe after reading your advertisement in this mornings Journal that you have just the opportunity I am looking for.
(2)your advertisement in this mornings Journal for an adjustment manager prompts me to offer you my qualifications for this position
C：(1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.
(2)In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.
求職的在提到生機(jī)得到的待遇時(shí)，可用類似的句子：
A：I hesitate to state a definite salary, but, as long as you have requested me to , I should consider 6,500 a month satisfactory. 我看待遇老是無奈定下確實(shí)數(shù)量，但既然你要我解釋，我認(rèn)為月薪六千五百元就滿足了。
B： Although it is difficult for me to say what compensation I should deserve, I should consider******a month a fair initial salary. 固然我很難說待遇應(yīng)當(dāng)是多少，我認(rèn)為每月******起薪適合。
C：I feel it is presumptuous of me to state what my salary should be. My first consideration is to satisfy you completely. However, while I am serving my apprenticeship, I should consider*****a month satisfactory compensation. 我不敢冒昧提出起薪是多少。最初我僅想如何做好工作，使您滿意。在學(xué)徒(試用)期間，月薪*****即可。
提起或要求待遇時(shí)不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用。
A： As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would$4,500 a month be too much? 至于起薪，我不知怎么說，月薪四千五百元會(huì)不會(huì)太多?
B：Do you think I should be asking too much if I said 5000 dollars a month? 若要求月薪五千元，會(huì)不會(huì)太高?
C：You know what my services are worth better than I do . All I want is a living wage. 對我工作的價(jià)值您比我更清晰。我能夠糊口即可。
求職信的第一段說明寫信的目的，有些專家認(rèn)為不宜用分詞子句。如用下面的句子做開頭，因?yàn)檫@樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得迂腐，失去特點(diǎn)。
Replying to your advertisement …… Answering your advertisement …… Believing that there is an opportunity …… Thinking that there is a vacancy in your company …… Having read your ad ……
再比較下列三句。(1)句較差，經(jīng)過修改后(2)句顯得較恰當(dāng)。
A：(1)Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager……
(2)In applying for the position of sales manager I offer my qualifications, which I believe will meet your exacting requirements.
B：(1)I believe after reading your advertisement in this mornings Journal that you have just the opportunity I am looking for.
(2)your advertisement in this mornings Journal for an adjustment manager prompts me to offer you my qualifications for this position
C：(1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.
(2)In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.
求職的在提到盼望得到的待遇時(shí)，可用相似的句子：
A：I hesitate to state a definite salary, but, as long as you have requested me to , I should consider 6,500 a month satisfactory. 我對待遇總是無法定下確切數(shù)目，但既然您要我說明，我認(rèn)為月薪六千五百元就滿意了。
B： Although it is difficult for me to say what compensation I should deserve, I should consider******a month a fair initial salary. 雖然我很難說待遇應(yīng)該是多少，我認(rèn)為每月******起薪合適。
C：I feel it is presumptuous of me to state what my salary should be. My first consideration is to satisfy you completely. However, while I am serving my apprenticeship, I should consider*****a month satisfactory compensation. 我不敢唐突提出起薪是多少。最初我僅想如何做好工作，使您滿意。在學(xué)徒(試用)期間，月薪*****即可。
提起或要求待遇時(shí)不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用。
A： As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would$4,500 a month be too much? 至于起薪，我不知怎么說，月薪四千五百元會(huì)不會(huì)太多?
B：Do you think I should be asking too much if I said 5000 dollars a month? 若請求月薪五千元，會(huì)不會(huì)太高?
C：You know what my services are worth better than I do . All I want is a living wage. 對我工作的價(jià)值您比我更明白。我可能糊口即可。
求職信要施展最大的后果，語氣必需確定、自信、有創(chuàng)意而不外分夸大，如能當(dāng)時(shí)了辭退主的愛好，或其余人格特點(diǎn)，依據(jù)物以類聚的原理，求職信如果能逢迎雇主的特點(diǎn)，求職的人必定可以比其他人占優(yōu)勢，取得面談的機(jī)會(huì)。
留神下面句子中語氣的不同：
A：I think that I should probably make a good ***** for you. 我想我可能成為貴公司的優(yōu)良的員工。
B：I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirements of your ***** position. 我想信我的教訓(xùn)跟別人對我的推舉可以使您充足了解我合乎貴公司*****一職的須要。
C：I recently completed a course in filing at the ***** School of Business. I am competent not only to install a filing system that will fulfill the needs of your organization, but I am also well qualified to operate it efficiently. 最近我在***********讀完*******課程，我信任不僅可以設(shè)計(jì)一套契合您的要求檔案分類體系，而且可以進(jìn)行有效的操作。
D：I feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which I completed at the ******** School of Business, I can install and operate efficiently a filing system for your organization. 我相信經(jīng)過我在*******學(xué)校的********課程學(xué)習(xí)之后，我可以替貴公司設(shè)置并且操作一套檔案分類系統(tǒng)。
第一句顯得語氣太弱，寫信的人有點(diǎn)羞澀的樣子。第二句有特別作風(fēng)，第三句太過自負(fù)，第四句，作者表現(xiàn)謙遜。
公司的老板大多認(rèn)為，重視小節(jié)的人對重大的事務(wù)也會(huì)謹(jǐn)嚴(yán)行事。一個(gè)人做人做事是否謹(jǐn)慎可以從一封求職信中看出來。別看輕了短短一封信，一封求職信可以露出出一個(gè)人的愛好、辨別力、教導(dǎo)水平以及人格特征。下列幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)便是泄漏一個(gè)人機(jī)密的地方。因而，寫信的人一定要留意。
A.紙張的選用：最好應(yīng)用品德精良，白色的信紙。信封要配合信紙的色彩。
B.書寫：求職者個(gè)別是把求職信打印出來，并加親筆簽名。簽名時(shí)字體要寫得穩(wěn)重得體，龍飛鳳舞的筆跡無疑是自尋死路。
C.格式：注釋要恰當(dāng)?shù)嘏帕性谛偶堉�，格局要全文一致，不要半途轉(zhuǎn)變。
D.語法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫：準(zhǔn)確無誤的語法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫使讀信人覺得舒服，過錯(cuò)的語法或拼寫則十明顯顯，一望即知，給人留下不好的印象。尤其要注意的是，毫不可把收信人的姓名或公司名稱拼錯(cuò)了。
E.信封：信封上面的地址要完全，稱呼要合時(shí)宜，信紙的折疊要適當(dāng)，大小合適信封。
F.附件：求職信通常不須附加推薦信，除非應(yīng)聘時(shí)有要求。碰到這種情況，只須附上復(fù)印件即可。另外，求職信內(nèi)附加郵票或貼好郵票寫好地址的回郵信封，逼迫對方答覆的作法不宜使用，除非對方有此要求。
需要思考的處所
寫求職信需要留意多少個(gè)方面：
A.陳述事實(shí)，防止表示看法：與工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)有關(guān)的事實(shí)可以陳說出來，但不應(yīng)強(qiáng)調(diào)將給將來工作帶來怎么的利益。
B.不要批評(píng)別人：假如你要分開現(xiàn)職，能夠說出起因但不要用批駁的方法，雇主想要懂得你，而非你的工作領(lǐng)會(huì)。
C.不要過火渲染自我：你當(dāng)然認(rèn)為有才能，夠資歷才要申請某一職位，但不要過分夸張本人的能力或表示過分的信念，尤其不要說出與事實(shí)不符的能力來。
D.留心底薪：有的雇重要你提到愿望的待遇。你要作正確的斷定，寫出你感到可行的最低薪金。良多人應(yīng)該曉得，與其尋得一份高薪的工作倒不如找待遇尚可而有升遷機(jī)遇的工作。
通過上面的說明，希望能對你有所輔助，祝你求職勝利!