1、(a)軟弱、羞怯的：If you think Ican fill the position after you have read my letter,I shall be glad to talk with you.讀完此信后倘您認為敝人可補缺，敝人愿和您一談。
(b)改寫后(較佳)：If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you,I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you,so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
2、(a)懷疑，不妥、不安全的：If you're interested,let me know immediately,as I'm sure and interview will convince you I'm the man for the job.倘貴公司有興趣，請即告知，敝人深信與您面談可以使您相信，敝人適合擔任此職。
(b)改寫后：May Ihave an interview?You can reach me by telephone at Taipei 884525 between the hours of 7-9a.m.and 5：30-9：30p.m.any evening.可否賜予面談?您可在每天上午七至九時，下午五時半至九時電884525號。
3、陳腐的句子：Hoping you will give me an interview,I am…(我希望您惠予面談)Anticipating afavorable decision,I wait your…(等候您的佳音)Trusting your reply will be satisfactory,I remain(靜候滿意的答復)
4、哀求式的句子，不夠完整(漏掉面談時間)：Won't you please give me the chance to interview your?I can be reached by calling Kenmore 69781.懇請惠予面談。請打電話K-69781
(b)改寫后：May Ihave the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you?My telephone is Kenmore 69781.You can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day.可否惠予面談以便進一步商討?我的電話是K-69781。我從上午九時到下午五時都可接通。
5、太過自信的句子：I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 731430.我深信面談可以證實我的話。您可在每天下午二至四時(星期二例外)打731430號電話通知我。
6、較具體有效的句子。May Ihave an interview?My residence telephone is(042)4398.You reach me by calling that number until June 30.After July 2,my address will be Kent House,Bretton Woods,New Hampshire.可否惠予面談?我住處電話為43981號。六月三十日以前我都在上址，七月二日以后，我的新址為新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。