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　　學習歷年高考英語寫作滿分范文，除了了解高考英語寫作考試類型，還可以掌握規范的寫作句式，對2017年高考英語更加胸有成竹。yjbys小編強烈建議同學們將下面八篇滿分范文進行熟讀或者背誦，希望大家在高考中能寫出來的好英語作文。

　　2016年北京卷(第二節情景作文：20分)

　　假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華。你班同學參加了學校的“地球日”系列活動。請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”為題，給�？�“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動的全過程。

　　注意：詞數不少于60。

　　提示詞：地球日Earth Day

　　【寫作解析】

　　情景作文話題常規，“地球日”系列活動屬于保護環境的體裁內容，屬于常規考法。公告欄了解活動、分工制作、變廢為寶的宣傳活動、主題講座都屬于考前練習過的場景。故而總體難度適中。

　　涉及到的具體細節參考詞匯：

　　圖 1：a notice on the bulletin board, Actions for a Greener Earth, arouse students’ interest, learn about the activity

　　圖 2：be divided into groups, transform waste into delicate articles, devote …to ..

　　圖 3：hold an activity in the nearby community, promote the awareness of Green Earth to more people, turn waste into wealth, show support, give the articles to neighbors

　　圖 4：hold a lecture in the auditorium, introduce the whole process of … and the importance of …

　　【優秀滿分范文】

　　Actions for a Greener Earth

　　A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.

　　Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, handbags, issue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.

　　We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.

　　2016年新課標I卷(滿分25分)1

　　假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷(resume)。給外教MS Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數100左右;

　　2. 可以適當增加細節，已使行文連貫。

　　【優秀滿分范文】

　　Dear MS Jenkins,

　　I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.

　　I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　2016年新課標Ⅱ卷(滿分25分)2

　　假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部(photography club)將舉辦國際中學攝影展。請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信。請他提供作品。信的內容包括：

　　1.主題：環境保護;

　　2.展覽時間;

　　3.投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

　　注意：

　　1.詞數100左右;

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　【優秀滿分范文】

　　Dear Peter,

　　Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.

　　The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

　　Hope to hear from you soon.

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【名師點睛】

　　本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任務，要點擴充合情合理，符合生活實際。建議對方參加本次展覽的理由符合邏輯：對方恰好有這一主題的作品。全文句式多樣化，并沒有一直使用陳述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀請函的特點。

　　文章中使用了較多的復合句，如定語從句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate，時間狀語從句the last time you visited our school，條件狀語從句If you want to join等。全文沒有中國式英語句式，體現出很高的駕馭英語的能力。

　　考點：考查半開放作文

　　2016年新課標Ⅲ卷(滿分25分)3

　　假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：

　　1.表示歉意;

　　2.說明原因;

　　3.另約時間。

　　注意：

　　1.詞數100左右;

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　【優秀滿分范文】

　　Dear Bob,

　　I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

　　Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【試題解析】

　　2016年浙江卷(滿分30分)4

　　“Planning is good，but doing is better”是一句英國名言。請以此為題目用英語寫一篇100-120詞的短文。

　　要求如下：

　　1.簡述你對這句名言的理解;

　　2.用一個具體事例加以說明;

　　3.給出恰當的結尾。

　　注意：1.文章的標題已給出(不計詞數);2.文中不得以任何形式透露地區、學校、老師或同學姓名等真實信息，否則按作弊行為認定。

　　【優秀滿分范文】

　　Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

　　Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

　　My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

　　I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

　　【名師點睛】

　　本篇范文短小精悍，結構合理，語言簡練，時態人稱準確，很好的完成了寫作任務。在文章開頭作者緊扣題目，提出自己對plan的理解，同時引出下文，然后用自己的親身經歷表明要將計劃付諸實施這點非常重要。在文中作者用到了短語in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短語，避免了文章句式的單一。此外，還用到了賓語從句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，這些都給樸素的語言帶來了亮點。

　　考點：考查開放式作文

　　2016年北京卷(第一節應用文：15分)

　　假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國歷史很感興趣，并請你介紹一位你喜歡的中國歷史人物。請你給Jim回信，內容包括：

　　1. 該人物是誰;

　　2. 該人物的主要貢獻;

　　3. 該人物對你的影響。

　　注意： 1. 詞數不少于50;2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　Dear Jim,

　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【作文解析】

　　應用文題材新穎，介紹中國歷史人物又能很好的結合對于中國傳統文化的考查，綜合考查了考生的日常積累能力，可謂別出心裁。本次小作文并沒有限定考生必須寫某一位歷史人物，但是談及人物的貢獻和對自己的影響時，肯定會涉及大量的詞匯障礙，故應用文的難度定然整體提升。

　　參考詞匯：in the long course of human history, contribute a lot to the development of …, be the pioneer of …, be honored the title of …, have a profound influence on …

　　【優秀滿分范文】

　　Dear Jim,

　　It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.

　　As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.

　　Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.

　　Cheers!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

 

　　2016年江蘇卷(滿分25分)7

　　請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

　　In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”.

　　Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer”competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

　　Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the“Future Singer”competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.

　　【寫作內容】

　　1. 用約30個單詞寫出上文概要;

　　2. 用約120個單詞闡述你對網絡投票的看法，并用2~3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。

　　【寫作要求】

　　1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;

　　2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱;

　　3. 不必寫標題。

　　【評分標準】

　　內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

　　【優秀滿分范文一】

　　On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

　　In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

　　To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.

　　(150 words)

　　【優秀滿分范文二】

　　Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.

　　In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.

　　In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.

　　(150 words)

　　2016年四川卷(滿分25分)8

　　某中學生英文報正舉辦“The Season I Like Best”的征文活動。請用英文寫一篇短文投稿，內容包括：

　　1. 你最喜歡的季節;

　　2. 你喜歡該季節的兩條理由(如：氣候、景色、活動、感受……)。

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數100左右;

　　2. 題目已為你寫好;

　　3. 行文連貫，語篇完整;

　　4. 文中不得透露個人真實信息。

　　【優秀滿分范文一】

　　The Season I Like Best

　　Of the four seasons, I like spring best.

　　One of the most important reasons is that all kinds of flowers are in bloom and days are full of hope (in) this season. At the same time, I can play outside too! Whether we like riding, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter.

　　Of course, there are many other reasons to explain why I’m so excited about spring!

　　精彩短語和句型

　　1. in bloom 盛開

　　2. be full of 充滿

　　3. at the same time 同時;然而

　　4. be excited about 對..... 感到興奮/激動

　　5. put on the back burner 把......擱置一邊;延后

　　6. Whether we like riding, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter.

　　無論我們喜歡騎自行車、慢跑或長時間散步，春天都能讓我們能去戶外享受這些活動，而這些活動在冬天只能被擱置的。

　　Whether...or...意為“不管…還是…”。allow sb. to do sth.允許某人做某事。That引導的是定語從句，先行詞為activities。

　　【優秀滿分范文二】

　　The Season I Like Best

　　If you ask me which season I like best, my answer is spring.

　　On the one hand, spring is the most beautiful season in a year because many kinds of flowers start to come out again, which are colorful. All the places around me are covered with green, making my life full of energy. On the other hand, I like spring because I can enjoy Spring Festival. It is known to us that the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, which comes in January or February. On that day, people eat delicious dumplings and wish a good luck. What’s more, I can get lucky money from my parents and buy some books which I like.

　　精彩短語和句型

　　1. on the one hand...on the other hand...

　　一方面……另一個方面......

　　2. be covered with 用……覆蓋

　　3. wish a good luck 祝福好運

　　4. All the places around me are covered with green, making my life full of energy.

　　句意為：我周圍的地方都充滿了綠色，讓我的生活充滿了活力。句中現在分詞短語作結果狀語。

　　5. It is known to us that the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, which comes in January or February. 眾所周知,春節是中國最重要的節日，它在1月或2月來臨。

　　句中it是形式主語，代替后面的that從句，同時which引導了一個非限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞festival。

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